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The bokeh looks nice and soft, I don't like the dark object in the top-right which I think is a distraction, but then I can't say for sure if it's better w/o it.  If would have put less of it in the frame so that the green would still be the outline of your key subject.
chobit 發表於 2012/5/1 11:19


Agreed on this point. I only scanned 3 last night. I have like a whole roll for this girl. I think there are some interesting ones that I haven't looked at.

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Your shot looks like one of those photos they use in a job article in the Jobs section. Again, it's funny how many different visual languages there are when it comes to portraits. With landscape or sports, there are only so many ways you can shoot. But with portraits, the possibility is endless.

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This help naturally define the line of her body.  I don't do fix poses like many other photographers, and I have a way to assist me, so that people can post more naturally regardless of his/her experience


But I don't find this natural at all? It's just as posed (if not more) as others?

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This is a completely diff picture, but I fig. it's may still help me express what I was talking abou ...
chobit 發表於 2012/5/1 16:59


The high exposure on her face hurts my eyes in this one.

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It was shoot Raw, so I only up the Raw and adjust it a little, see if it's better.  Yet, don't forge ...
chobit 發表於 2012/5/1 19:56


yes
contrast depends on the monitor as well
but if every other shot looks fine and that one particularly hurts
then that's still a problem.

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After all the color, a couple B&Ws. Shot with Ilford FP4 125.



A double exposure:

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You like to use flash a lot.

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Something different. Also from last Saturday (but a different shoot)

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Partly inspired by, of course, who else

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