新LYK在此一遊 會員自我介紹篇 LYK, LYK

-chunchun-

見上面３個ｐｏｓｔ都好多人回貼，我又ｃ下開個新ｐｏｓｔ先．　＜＜自我介紹－技能篇＞＞

我系此ｐｏｓｔ第１個發帖：　

我無咩特別話好勁的技能，但我諗關與電腦方面的資訊應該算ｏｋ．由其graphic Design...lor !

我系自己開廣告公司的，平時多數的ｊｏｂ都自己做，除左做唔切之外，好少比人做．有時自己寫下網業（ｐｈｐ），做下ｒａｎｋｉｎｇ（自己ｅ＋個網站（廣告網站）系alexa排名在９００萬），ｇｏｏｇｌｅ排名在第一版，ｙａｈｏｏ排名在第１版最尾．．．（哈哈）

好似有ｄ自我宣傳甘添．．唔講我啦，不如各位自我介紹下啦．

AmericanBeauty

I'm a photographer; portrait is my specialization.
I also work for a team of people who catch bad guys.

katamari

oh! My company website is 1 million higher than you wor!

myversa

I agree with lerico.  You should have your own sample instead giving people false impression that those samples are made by you.

In addition, there are some grammar errors in your wordings...

Hope this is not too harsh.  

lerico

仲有lor... 唔好抄第二d site o既content, 一google 好容易搵到ga ja...

Google Result:
http://www.businesslogo.net/brochure-design.html

Your Page:
http://www.ksmglobal.com/ebusiness/brochure%20design.htm

仲要連SAMPLE 都抄埋tim... o個間公司o係美國wor... 唔係你o既分店掛...

[ 本帖最後由 lerico 於 2008-1-3 11:02 編輯 ]

lerico

你有冇比廣告費lyk ga? 你都好hardsell wor...

我入過你個site... 一個好o既開始, 但係可以做得好d lor, 比我o既impression 好似唔係好pro gum lor... 你o既client 可能唔覺, webpage 只係webpage, 但係我發現以下幾點可以improve la:

從web design 方面:
- 唔好用frontpage4.0 啦...
- 唔好用table 做layout, 用div ma
- 用css啦... 唔好用font tag
- filename唔應該有space
- horizontal menu 用css 做仲好, 唔好用image, load得慢

從graphic design / layout 方面:
- Font size 同type 都要consistent throughout lor
- 太多colour, 太busy le (<--- 個人喜好)

不過d個係一個好好o既開始, 我希望你成功啦!!! :-) 可能你比client o既product 好過自己個page 好多, 但係自己個page 係first impression, 好仲要ga.

我都係同你係行家, 不過我打工o既, 唔做出面client. 唔係同你compete, 只係比少少comment 啦. 唔好見怪.