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-chunchun-

剛剛接左個job, 都唔算接..幫個朋友間公司手.(免費) 做左個好簡單的平面廣告,比佢放系個blog到. 用左20mins做. 想問下d女仔意見...

1) 個圖既concept,得唔得..?
2) d圖位置好唔好...?
3) d圖會唔會過分性感....(但我個fd間store系賣女性內衣的)
4) 有咩好意見,或者圖片可以介紹..



[ 本帖最後由 -chunchun- 於 2008-1-8 22:01 編輯 ]

yomiko088

hmm... u've to login before u can see the pic/logo.... that's why nobody can see it.... u may wanna edit it abit...

its_visa

okay....so i clicked in here....
and this is what it showed up........? uh.......

-chunchun-

change the path already. So it is ok to see.

How is the pic looking..any comment?

[ 本帖最後由 -chunchun- 於 2008-1-8 22:02 編輯 ]

lerico

DELETED. Since you have just fixed the link to your picture. :-)

[ 本帖最後由 lerico 於 2008-1-8 22:03 編輯 ]

-chunchun-

Thks for helping to upload the picture. I just fix it.

^^

lerico

Since I am not a girl, I won't wanna comment on the design. But I noticed that we usually say "Get Rid OF something" instead, hmmm... but does anybody wanna get rid of comfort?

... also... shouldn't it be "Be a Sexy Lady" instead of "A" Ladies?

... and... usually isn't it just "New Year Sale"?

... lastly... shouldn't it be "Valid Until:"?

:-)

[ 本帖最後由 lerico 於 2008-1-8 22:15 編輯 ]

its_visa

okie....now i can see the picture !
im a girl....so im gonna give u comments...straight forward ones

1st .... i dun really like the pentagon around the word "BRA" or is that the logo? haha if so, i dun like the logo design haha....
2nd...my first impression of the ad "WOw....seems like a sex store more than a lingerie store....
3rd....the background shud be either pink or something light colored (pastel perhaps) to actually RELATE to the event since its NEW YEAR SALE and its for valentines...
4th, change the font ....
5th....the picture's position is kinda....awkward....also, for that "coupon" look a like thing is kinda awkward also....
haha...
i shud stop now....let me just point out these....haha
dun mind me for my straight forward-ness!!

-chunchun-

thks for the comment.. I redo again and post later ..

Ths

hunny_master

somehow i think the slogan "get rid OF comfort, be free" does not match with the pictures...i don't see how they relate to each other...